TwilightNecrosis's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[What Lies in Darkness]

Awesome.

I'm digging the experimental feel, off-beat drum hits, etc.
Just needs vocals, and maybe a guitar lead somewhere, and this would be a work of fucking art.
Does your band consist of people around your town, or is it an Internet project?

Creeping-Dan responds:

Its both man! Its a band thats an open forum basically.

[Bleeding the Dead]

Awesome, man.

All it needs is some crazy deep, Deicide-type vocals and this would be a masterpiece.
I'm not sure I could pull them off, but I might try sometime, with your permission, of course.

Eternalreich responds:

kill it

i have no lyrics for this

it wasnt really a complete song

go for it though

[Adapt to the Horde]

Dude...

This kicks my ass.
Considering all the other projects on my plate (and the snail-pace rate at which I complete them), it will probably be awhile before I can write some lyrics for this beauty, but I like the title, so I'll probably stay in that vein.
And BTW, blood tastes best at midnight.

Eternalreich responds:

please do ill post lyrics that i had if u want to use them if you want patterns or anything pm me yo

:02-:14
Through the eyes of the world
We are beings of one mind
You only see what they want you to see
Adapt to the horde

:22-:34
Random thought irrational process
These mechanisms are triggered from taste, sight, touch, sound
A whirlwind of interpreted meanings
In truth are meaningless

:37-:42ish
Marching onward

:54 -1:04
A blank stare devoid of feeling
Hides an altered state of mind
Seperastion of thought and being
Losing focus slipping away

chorus:
1:05 - 1:15
Like chainsaw therapy
Like your worst enemy
Stay the fuck away from me
And tolerate nothing

1:20 -1:41 or 4:09-4:40 (i once had a mellow clean part on the 409 one)
take a look at your self from the outside in
You're melding well with the masses
Believe the lie until the end
Making way for the horde

use it, don't use it, rearrange, or whatever

[Old Man Grunge(Updated3)]

Good start...

Now all you need is the rest of the song.
Maybe a ringing chorus, three or four chords, and use what you've got here as the verses.
The guitars are a little muddy, still.
Also, the drum's cymbals are way too loud/clear, they don't mesh with the rest of the song.
A bridge would be nice too.
Overal, what it sounds like you have here is a really good intro/verse.
A great, epic chorus and a bridge would make this a good, 3 and a half minute song, with plenty of variance.
Keep writing, and good luck.
I'd love to play the solo, if you can't find anyone else to do it.

loansindi responds:

I agree that this isn't really a 'complete' song yet, the chorus is in the works.

As for the percussion, they're computer generated (with cheap software). I hope to either find a real drummer and record it, or maybe eventually get better samples.

[Nothing Else Matters In Church]

Awesome!

I usually hate synthed music, but this was almost spot-on.
Only gripes I have are some jumped notes in the outro. (i.e. you changed chords too soon, but that's nothing 2 minutes of reprogramming can't fix.)
I'd love to try to put the vocal over this, I think the choir might get in the way on occasion, but I think I could pull it off.
Love it, man. You're the king.

Bad-Man-Incorporated responds:

I can hit you up a version without the choir if you want. Thanks for the review, man.

[2'29'']

Well...

I'm going to have to agree with Mighty-Buffoon...
This was definitely played too quickly.
And you can fit a surprising amount into 8mb, depending on how low you set the quality. :p

Haggard responds:

I have to say I like the quick version a bit better.

I think even with a quality of 16 kb/s I can hardly fit one single note of ASLSP into 8 MB -.- .

[ripped aparted (new recording)]

Good work.

This is a really good piece.
I like that the bass is audible, but the tone isn't quite there...some slight changes would make it stand out as amazing instead of really good.
The riffs are nice and heavy, just the way I like 'em.
The solos, while not outstanding, fit pretty well and are in key, so no gripes there.
All it needs is a vocal. If you can write some lyrics, I'd be glad to lay a vocal track on this beauty.

cowdog2 responds:

thanks for the review man, but I already got someone to do the vocals for it.

and I have to say the bass is actually my favorite part of the song, haha. Oh and yea i know my solo isn't the best, it was pretty slopp-i-licious.

[§haded in Blood (Bad Man Inc)]

I have an idea...

I think what you have is a condition I call "recording ear".
You're extremely critical of your own work, but everyone else's sounds fine, because you listen to your own work and hear nothing but the flaws, while you don't listen for the flaws in other people's songs.
Don't be so critical of your work, it's fucking badass.
It sounds great, everyone tells you it sounds great...it's great.

Bad-Man-Incorporated responds:

That could be. haha. Thanks man. I swear though, this sounded like hell on my work speakers. haha. Glad you like it, man. Thanks for the words!\m/

[Thousand years w/ vocals]

Very Amon Amarth...

Which, of course, is not a bad thing at all.
Good instrumentalism, tone could use a bit of work, though.
Vox sound pretty good.
No glaring flaws, overall.
Keep up the good work.
TN

Bonemill responds:

Its very amon amarth because it is amon amarth hahahaha.

Its a cover.