TwilightNecrosis's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Z.A.P. - Abuse yourself 0.6]

Well...

I'll start off by saying it's not bad.
However, there are some things that could be a lot better.
The distorted guitar is actually too distorted, in a bad way.
That distortion is 'digital' distortion, which is really just nasty fuzz.
You need some good analog distortion, such as a distortion pedal or a good guitar amp or amp program.
I do really like the harmonies, and the layout of the song is definitely not bad.
Honestly, there's a ton of potential here, but the execution definitely needs work.
I look forward to hearing the finished product.

Sureiyaazu responds:

I used a POD 2.0 .... with the Insane distortion... ^^
I gonna think about it...
thank you, too =)

[Deathgore's Theme]

Excellent.

Some of your bends are just a hair flat, not sure if that's intentional or accidental.
Other than that, good stuff.

DarKsidE555 responds:

To be honest, it was intended...I wanted to create a little disharmonic feel there to go on with the fx. Normally I try to bend it right. XD

Hehe, anyways, glad you liked the rest, thanks for checking!

[Cerberus - Falling Empire]

Wow, that's wierd.

Your guitar tone went from not enough bass to too much.
You just can't get it right, lawl.
Seriously, though, this has me interested. I'm going to look this band up here in a minute.
As far as critiques go, I'd just take some of the bass out of the guitar sound.
Other than that, badass!

Creeping-Dan responds:

Yeh, i was finding a tone with the POD, got me a gooden now.

[Death by bear (w/vox)]

Hell yes, motherfucker!!!

Damn, dude. Sounds badass.
I should have probably gone back and doubled those last two choruses, but fuck man, this shit's brutal enough as is.

4.01 / 5.00 (+ 0.071)

XxCowMeatxX responds:

its never to late. if u still have ur tracks, go and do it and ill put it back up.

[Coersion of Euthanasia]

Definitely a lot of high points.

I only really have one critique, and I can say it it one word: intelligibility.
That's the main problem I have with pig-squealing in general; it never changes, and has no musicality to it whatsoever.
I definitely agree with kevs91, they added almost nothing to the song except volume.
I can also hear you taking breaths between words/lines.
However, your guitar work is very elaborate and well-executed.
The only thing I would change is the tone; it's too muddy, and some of the little fast runs and palm-mutes get lost in the mud.
Take out some of the mids, and a little of the bass, and they would clean right up.
Also, the ride you use from about :23 to :39 is too loud.
In fact, the cymbals seem to be too loud throughout, with some exceptions.
They're so loud, in fact, that the bass drum and snare get lost under the guitar and cymbals. Turn down the cymbals, and crank up the bass especially. We need to hear that shit, bro.
This is the first song I've heard from you, and it's excellent.
It needs a bit of work, but it is definitely awesome.
I'm going to listen to the rest of your shit, because this has me interested.
Awesome work.
METAL FOREVER!!!

DekapitatoR responds:

Thanks alot

[Deathquake]

Great, but could be better.

I agree with Bad-Man, your delivery is spot-on.
However, I think a little bit more grunge in your voice would compliment the riffs better.
It might just be me, but your vocals stand out a bit too much from the heaviness of the rest of the song, and a little growl (but not too much) would fit a bit better, to me.
That said, I like the lyrics (what I could pick up of them) and your delivery is excellent.
Good work.

Extar responds:

Glad you liked the lyrics and what not. I think I see where you're coming from on the vocal delivery thing, a bit more growl probably would do a world of good. Anyway, thanks for the review :D

[Bad Man - Reich Colab Preview]

Good start.

I like the harmonies in the opening riff, which kicks ass.
The next riff sounds very metalcore-y, and if that's where you're going with the song, then that's cool, but if not, then I'd suggest throwing something 'off' in there, like a tritone or something.
I can't wait to hear the finished song, you and Bad-Man are two of the best metal musicians on NG, and I have high expectations for this collab.

Eternalreich responds:

wasnt thinkin metal core at all but maybe some more layering on it

[9000]

Just one question...

Did you absolutely HAVE to throw that Metalocalypse riff in there?
Just kidding, it sounds badass.
Love the leads, as always.
Excellent.

Xenogenocide responds:

Well, it's not exactly the metalocalypse riff. It's different see, if you listen carefully you might be able to notice a 3rd chord played in conjunction with the two which are most definitely used in the actual metalocalypse song.

Thanks for the review :)

[In Her I Can Disappear]

Great work, man.

The only thing I could find wrong with this is that the cymbals (esp. the hi-hat) are too loud.
The bass and snare are great, though.
Guitars as well.
Excellent work, I'd like to add this to my already-excessive workload for vocals, if that's alright with you.

350teric responds:

Man, I'm delighted that you like the song, even to put vocals on it, but I will records the vocals in the next few days maybe week, just to buy the mixer that I want, so it could be really well produced! Sorry, but thanks!

[In The Dragon's Den - SX Cover]

Oh my holy jeebers...

This is fucking BADASS.
Definitely needs some mixing, though.
Mainly, the solos were way too loud, especially the first one.
The vocals could come up a bit.
And that's all I've got. Amazing work, gentlemen.
And if you guys ever need another guitar or some vocals, don't hesitate to ask me.
Great, great job.
4.09 / 5.00 (+ 0.098) < all my little 5 could do

Newgrounds-United responds:

Thanks, man. I'm glad you liked it ! yeah, actually this this more a rough copy than a finished version. First, Hating4AM will remake the synth and I will work on the solo levels ... and rise the vokills up !

And we would be happy to add you one the list !

Sonofkirk