Wow, no vox yet?
It definitely needs them.
The mixing could use a bit of work too. Mainly the drums.
The snare is a little bit loud for my taste; you might try compressing it a bit (try threshold -10dB, ratio 5:1, no makeup gain), then adding some reverb to sweeten it up.
The kick sounds kinda 'flabby' to me... are you using an undamped sample?
If so, it could probably use some compression as well.
IMO, you need some fills here and there; it seems like the riffs change with little or no warning sometimes (example: 1:51ish).
What DAW are you using? If it's capable of using sends and returns, you should definitely set up EZDrummer to use multiple tracks for the different mics, so you can EQ and effect the kick, snare, toms, overhead, etc. individually.
That is, if you aren't doing so already. =]
DK84 is definitely right about the intro; it pulls you in, and then never lets go until the end.
The breakdown is great too. Sure, breakdowns are generic most of the time, but fuck... it's still excellent.
Awesome track, my friend; so awesome that it deserves a 10 even with it's issues.
Hope to hear it with vox soon, even if I have to do them. =p
Metal! \m/
Oh, and I'd appreciate it if you'd check out my newest submission: http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/214194 .
Thanks!