TwilightNecrosis's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Bleeding the Dead]

Awesome, man.

All it needs is some crazy deep, Deicide-type vocals and this would be a masterpiece.
I'm not sure I could pull them off, but I might try sometime, with your permission, of course.

Eternalreich responds:

kill it

i have no lyrics for this

it wasnt really a complete song

go for it though

[Adapt to the Horde]

Dude...

This kicks my ass.
Considering all the other projects on my plate (and the snail-pace rate at which I complete them), it will probably be awhile before I can write some lyrics for this beauty, but I like the title, so I'll probably stay in that vein.
And BTW, blood tastes best at midnight.

Eternalreich responds:

please do ill post lyrics that i had if u want to use them if you want patterns or anything pm me yo

:02-:14
Through the eyes of the world
We are beings of one mind
You only see what they want you to see
Adapt to the horde

:22-:34
Random thought irrational process
These mechanisms are triggered from taste, sight, touch, sound
A whirlwind of interpreted meanings
In truth are meaningless

:37-:42ish
Marching onward

:54 -1:04
A blank stare devoid of feeling
Hides an altered state of mind
Seperastion of thought and being
Losing focus slipping away

chorus:
1:05 - 1:15
Like chainsaw therapy
Like your worst enemy
Stay the fuck away from me
And tolerate nothing

1:20 -1:41 or 4:09-4:40 (i once had a mellow clean part on the 409 one)
take a look at your self from the outside in
You're melding well with the masses
Believe the lie until the end
Making way for the horde

use it, don't use it, rearrange, or whatever

[The Training]

Very tasty...

The only gripe that I can find is that the guitars are a little too fuzzy.
It's not too bad, but that's all I could hear that detracted from it.
Nice work.

[The moment of breaking]

I like it.

It sounds more like general rock. I would have put this over there.
Also, I agree with IDReaper; you're good at the instruments, you just need to work on your production skills, and all that really is is experimentation, so don't be afraid of compression, chorus, etc.
Also, I think palm mutes would sound better than those chinks, at least some of the time.
4/5.

[Old Man Grunge(Updated3)]

Good start...

Now all you need is the rest of the song.
Maybe a ringing chorus, three or four chords, and use what you've got here as the verses.
The guitars are a little muddy, still.
Also, the drum's cymbals are way too loud/clear, they don't mesh with the rest of the song.
A bridge would be nice too.
Overal, what it sounds like you have here is a really good intro/verse.
A great, epic chorus and a bridge would make this a good, 3 and a half minute song, with plenty of variance.
Keep writing, and good luck.
I'd love to play the solo, if you can't find anyone else to do it.

loansindi responds:

I agree that this isn't really a 'complete' song yet, the chorus is in the works.

As for the percussion, they're computer generated (with cheap software). I hope to either find a real drummer and record it, or maybe eventually get better samples.

[D.G.S.P.S.]

Dude...this blows my mind.

I don't understand how you come up with your shit, but it's fucking incredible.
I've never attempted vocals on something like this; I'd love to try, though.
Metal forever!

[Nothing Else Matters In Church]

Awesome!

I usually hate synthed music, but this was almost spot-on.
Only gripes I have are some jumped notes in the outro. (i.e. you changed chords too soon, but that's nothing 2 minutes of reprogramming can't fix.)
I'd love to try to put the vocal over this, I think the choir might get in the way on occasion, but I think I could pull it off.
Love it, man. You're the king.

Bad-Man-Incorporated responds:

I can hit you up a version without the choir if you want. Thanks for the review, man.

[2'29'']

Well...

I'm going to have to agree with Mighty-Buffoon...
This was definitely played too quickly.
And you can fit a surprising amount into 8mb, depending on how low you set the quality. :p

Haggard responds:

I have to say I like the quick version a bit better.

I think even with a quality of 16 kb/s I can hardly fit one single note of ASLSP into 8 MB -.- .